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A Country Woman:   I thought this was really good.  Your best expression of your nemesis plot that I have read yet. I was intrigued by the character and her actions. The transitions into verse were interesting , definitely made the plot move... If there was a part 2. I would be excited to read it.

V: the lineation really compliments the theme of the poem.. As the lines spill over and suddenly stop, it added a sense of out-of-controlness.   Very good job conveying emotion, intense poem.

Until the Landscape Rang:  imagery stood out amongnst all else.  The part where he turns to fluid and then resolidifies is great.. Very interesting to imagine.  I thought the story flowed along well and was very easy to read and understand.  And, of course, I dug the pop culture plugs.